How about ....
Posted By: Gina on 2008-03-17
In Reply to: Does this sentence make sense? - trying to write a letter
"Currently, there is already a lack of adequate class time for the core classes such as math, language arts, and science. The addition of special classes such as music or art, however beneficial, should not take priority nor should they cut into core class time."
or
"Currently, there is already a lack of adequate class time for the core classes such as math, language arts, and science. The addition of special classes such as music or art, however beneficial, should not take priority nor should they take away from the already limited time for core classes."
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