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Posted By: SuPA on 2005-09-28
In Reply to: Opinions needed on my tweaking ... sm - Pat

Subject: Help Tweaking

Because he is intelligent, hard-working, motivated and personal, I believe he will be a fine physician.


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I recently had the opportunity to become acquainted with Mr. X when he spent a week here in my Internal Medicine office this past summer. He is currently a student at XX University and has decided on a career in medicine. In preparation for the process of starting a medical career, Mr. X has spent time with multiple physicians in order to demonstrate that he is serious about a career in medicine. One of Mr. X's assets is his excellent personal skills, as you will see when you interview him. I also found that he asked intelligent questions and showed a genuine interest while he was here with me in the office. His thought processes seemed both logical and rational during our discussions.


In my opinion, Mr. X has all the makings of a dedicated future physician. I believe he is motivated, hard working, intelligent and personable. I hightly recommend that he be accepted in your training to become an xxx physician.


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Or, You can write....He possesses qualities such as ..... and in my opinion he will be a fine physician.
Opinions needed on my tweaking ... sm
Subject: Opinions needed on my tweaking ... sm

Here's my tweaking:   I think it looks okay except for the last sentence.  Can anyone help me make that last sentence look better?  Thank you.


 


Dear xxxx :


 


I am pleased to write a letter of recommendation for XXX who is applying to your program.  XXX spent a week with me in my internal medicine office this past summer.  He is currently a student at XXX and has decided on a career in a medicine.  In the process of starting his medical career, xxx has spent time with multiple physicians to show that he is serious about a career in medicine.  He has excellent personal skills, as you will see when you interview him. 


 


During the time I spent with xxx  he asked intelligent questions and showed a genuine interest.  His thought process seemed both logical and rational during our discussions.


 


Based on my experiences with x,  I recommend highly that he be accepted in your training to become an xxx physician.  I believe he has all the makings of good physician, intelligence hard-working, motivated, and personal. 


 


 


Help needed Tweaking a letter. See message please
Subject: Help needed Tweaking a letter. See message please

My MD dictated a letter of recommendation and would like me to make him sound better.  Gosh!!  I am so brain dead when it comes to these things... been doing verbatim transcription for far toooo long. 


 


Would anyone out there like to give this a whirl? 


 


I appreciate any suggstions.  Thanks.


 


 


Mr. X spent a week with me in my internal medicine office this past summer.  He is currently a student at XX University and has decided on a career in a medicine.  Mr. X, in the process of starting his medical career, has spent time with multiple physicians to show that he is serious about a career in medicine.  Mr X has excellent personal skills, as you will see when you interview him.  He asked intelligent questions and showed a genuine interest while he was here with me in the office.  His thought process seemed both logical and rational during our discussions.


 


Mr. X  has all the makings of a good physician, intelligence, hardworking, motivated, and personal.  I recommend highly that he be accepted in your training to become an xxx  physician.